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Page 23 folks! woot!

So I want to dedicate this page to :iconstrongpawz: . He and I have had good times in an rp based on this story of mine for the last three years and I dare say that it really has been a great way to exercise ideas out and try things that I'm considering for the story. I felt it only right to bring his characters into the tale officially, so with his permission and his willingness to trust me with how his characters are written and portrayed, I put them into the story. We only have a glimpse of them on this page but we'll see a bit more on the next.

Enjoy mates XD

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~lethe-gray Oct 4, 2009, 4:05:50 PM
*snerk* rolling pins rule :) Makes me wonder whether we'll ever get to know more about that little incident. :D

"Of course" (coarse = thick and rough)

The human's eyes look a little odd, they're not quite pointing in the same direction, that's about the only artistic hint I can say for this page.

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~dtf-stock stock account; ~world-of-zekira rpg / adoptable account
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~LazarCotoron Oct 4, 2009, 11:06:28 PM
"Expertly" is in the lumps of the person thus struck, so I find it likely that Nikolai is holding something personal because he was the one who was dumb enough to be sitting around when it all went wrong.

Course, that's just sort've my experience with what happens to people who are with me when I suddenly realize it's time to go and they haven't realized that at quite the same speed as I have.

Clearly I have to do my own crazed animated icons if I want to put here what I think should BE here.

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You see a light wherever you go... you have to face it again and again. -Shadow's Theme, Sonic Adventure 2
:iconjan-michael9500:
~jan-michael9500 Oct 5, 2009, 5:52:36 AM
woot! nice... though the text with the pinkish speech bubbles are somewhat hard to read... maybe use white for the text color?

by the way, what are those schematic things there? i cant seem to make em out XD

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People say "LOVE is so important that you can't live without it!"

Uh huh, oxygen is just as important.
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~wolf-strider-2 Oct 5, 2009, 9:12:19 AM
LOL 'Of course you will' I found that so funny. Ah you made my slightly stressfull day so much more brighter because of this. The stories progressing amazingly as well. The only thing is with the later bit it does fee a little random, but that may just be because the next page is needed to make it flow completely. I cant quite put my finger on what I exactly mean though sorry.

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if the world took an eye for an eye the whole world would be blind
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*darklion Oct 5, 2009, 10:18:31 AM
just digital panels and the like. you aren't really supposed to "make them out" they're just floationg holograph screens that are in T'sengs office there. XD

And yea, that text, I deliberated about it. It's on the boarder. It's still readable, but it's also, at you say, hard to read, so I may change it. I'll wait and see how many folks are bugged by it I think XD

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo
:icondarklion:
*darklion Oct 5, 2009, 10:21:42 AM
No, you have a good point. It does feel a bit random. A scene change in the middle of a page is not often done, but the next page will have more of those characters and tie back into stuff I'm building. Remember, this is a long story, so things that don't make sense right now will come full circle and be explained in the propper amount of time. XD

But hey, glad I made you're day, man! XD

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo
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*darklion Oct 5, 2009, 10:26:02 AM
Yes, rolling pins ftw XDDDD Text issues are fixed now I think, thanks for catching that as always. Geez, I really should be paying you with all the editing you've done for me LOL It's much appreciated!

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo
:iconlethe-gray:
~lethe-gray Oct 5, 2009, 11:10:37 AM
hahaha :) As long as it's not bothering you. I know some folks don't WANT that help (particularly a couple folks who are german or otherwise european, and you know how in German they capitalize nouns? and we don't in english?? yeah, huffy about that...) so I'm glad it's appreciated :D

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~dtf-stock stock account; ~world-of-zekira rpg / adoptable account
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*darklion Oct 5, 2009, 9:27:16 PM
not at all! I appreciate the feed back XD

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo
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