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(2nd edit) I upped the page size a bit to make it easier to read matyes. hope this is enough XD)
(Edit) Damnit LOL I must remember that Spell Check is my friend! XD Hopefully it's fixed now XD.
hopefully this looks ok at this size. if not I can up it a bit. It's original size is muuuch bigger.
So mateys, page one XD This is alot of work LOL but I'm having fun with it. XD
I'm posting this here again to advertise XD This is the main place where I will post the comic though
I figure one or two pages each chapter will get posted here, but the rest only get posted there, so if you want to follow it, go there XD
Anywho, let me know what you think mates! (Also, I hate to say this, but, please be respectful. I love crits and such, but if you are disrespectful about things in your comment, i'm going to hide it. I'm doing this for fun. Please don't let this deture you from critiquing, just be respectful about it. flaming or slamming me is not cool.)
Anywho, peace mateys. enjoy and let me know your thoughts, suggestions, ect. XD
next page: [link]
(Edit) Damnit LOL I must remember that Spell Check is my friend! XD Hopefully it's fixed now XD.
hopefully this looks ok at this size. if not I can up it a bit. It's original size is muuuch bigger.
So mateys, page one XD This is alot of work LOL but I'm having fun with it. XD
I'm posting this here again to advertise XD This is the main place where I will post the comic though
I figure one or two pages each chapter will get posted here, but the rest only get posted there, so if you want to follow it, go there XDAnywho, let me know what you think mates! (Also, I hate to say this, but, please be respectful. I love crits and such, but if you are disrespectful about things in your comment, i'm going to hide it. I'm doing this for fun. Please don't let this deture you from critiquing, just be respectful about it. flaming or slamming me is not cool.)
Anywho, peace mateys. enjoy and let me know your thoughts, suggestions, ect. XD
next page: [link]
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Okay, before I start going onto a comment and fav spree in your gallery:
I've read the whole comic and enjoyed it IMMENSELY. You do so well, in so many aspects, of comicking and frankly any kind of criticism that comes up now from me will be pretty useless but I hope you don't mind my brain farts regarding your comic :3
As with this page... Wow... this... THIS is what a comic should start like. Many interesting shots and angles, focus on the main character while still having a great background with something going on in there to keep the page alive... I swear I could hear the raindrops while reading. if something 'could' be criticised then it would be the narration. While nice, a first person narration from Roah's point-of-view might've been more fitting and fluid, bringing the reader closer to her, rather than just... observing her.
Anyways, I was planning to go into bed before I stumbled upon this comic and with this page, I knew I wouldn't get to sleep until I finished it (or as far as it gets :3)
I've read the whole comic and enjoyed it IMMENSELY. You do so well, in so many aspects, of comicking and frankly any kind of criticism that comes up now from me will be pretty useless but I hope you don't mind my brain farts regarding your comic :3
As with this page... Wow... this... THIS is what a comic should start like. Many interesting shots and angles, focus on the main character while still having a great background with something going on in there to keep the page alive... I swear I could hear the raindrops while reading. if something 'could' be criticised then it would be the narration. While nice, a first person narration from Roah's point-of-view might've been more fitting and fluid, bringing the reader closer to her, rather than just... observing her.
Anyways, I was planning to go into bed before I stumbled upon this comic and with this page, I knew I wouldn't get to sleep until I finished it (or as far as it gets :3)