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©2007-2009 *darklion
:icondarklion:

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Woot, page four is done. This one is rather wordy, sorry. I also appologize for having to go at a snails pace of this. I'm really juggling projects right now.

Anywho, Dusk makes his first appearance in the comic, cryptic as always XD. I used black word bubbles and white type for him as well as italics to try and give the reader some sense of how he sounds. A dark, smooth, rolling voice, soft spoken but powerful. XD enjoy mateys!

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:iconjakiro101:
wooo.... awesome...
and yes... im still workin on
that tribute of mine...lol..XD

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:iconlethe-gray:
Good show!

The panel layouts are nice, but the lines themselves are a bit distracting. You might try tightening up the panels a little, losing some of the pencil areas that aren't directly colored. I will admit that I'm not a huge fan of pencil-to-color works, but aside from those panel line indicators being a little distracting to me, this has been very successfully done that way :)

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:icondarklion:
Hey thanks! You know, I didn't use to be either, but part of it's work load. i'm the writer, penciler, colorist plus school work and other projects so i decided that inking was what was going to have to give LOL That, and as of recently, i've been finding I like pencil to color more than I use to. it almost seems to have more life to me than inked does. maybe because it's not so pristine and finalized. i dunno. But yea, I totally see what you mean about getting rid of the lines around the panels. I think you're totally right. they need to go. thanks matey! much appreciated feedback! XD

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo
:icondarklion:
Woot! I can't wait to see it matey! and thanks!

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo
:iconraven-blood-13:
Wow awesome! I knew it would be him!

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:blackrose:The world could be the most bright and colorfull place but without music it's all black and white.:blackrose:

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Grinning Mad Crew rocks!
:iconsara-lj:
wow! twist of events :)
interesting! id be so freaked out if an object that looked like the toy would start talking to me like that.

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*Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

*Hard work never killed anybody, but why take a chance? :XD:
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:jawdrop: it's sooooooooo pretty, wow the next page next page :D

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if the world took an eye for an eye the whole world would be blind
:iconrustynormandale:
That feline looks very good. Nicely colored.

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